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Jan 18

Mirror Haiku #3

Category: Tanka and Haiku

Cast upon the pond

shadow mirrors shadow’s self

one tree becomes two

Pamela Olson

4 Comments so far

  1. Rick January 19th, 2008 6:09 pm

    I’m not sure the hinge line works … perhaps it’s the hyphenated word.

  2. Pam January 19th, 2008 6:13 pm

    I believe you are right. I will change the line now.

  3. rick January 20th, 2008 3:44 pm

    Much better

  4. Emily January 21st, 2008 4:42 pm

    this is my other favorite

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