Amputated Moon

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Feb 13

My Heart Lies Open

Category: Tanka and Haiku

My heart lies openmoss.jpg

moonlight sighs on mossy ground

waiting for your touch

Pam Olson, 2/13/08

 

 

 

11 Comments so far

  1. brendanblue February 13th, 2008 7:04 am

    A halcyon readiness … how else could we love without the world’s raputre?

  2. Joy February 13th, 2008 2:34 pm

    Stumbled across this today from a link on another blog I was directed to. You have a beautiful blog both in it’s appearance and words.

  3. SandyCarlson February 13th, 2008 2:43 pm

    Beautiful poem, Pam. Such longing!
    Writing in Faith: Poems

  4. Tumblewords February 14th, 2008 12:41 am

    Lovely! Lovely! The photo works so well with the words and thoughts!

  5. Scott February 14th, 2008 1:22 pm

    I was actually taken aback by this piece and picture and took a deep breath as I sat with it. Words escape me so I will read it again and simply soak in it. Well done.

  6. Sara February 14th, 2008 5:40 pm

    Very romantic! Perfect for Valentine’s Day

  7. Noah February 14th, 2008 6:42 pm

    Do you need a hug?

    :P

    It’s beautiful…

    Way better than the car crash I was in earlier.

  8. LittleWing February 15th, 2008 12:43 pm

    …beautiful…

  9. Andrée February 16th, 2008 8:56 am

    Exquisite. It sighs. Your poem creates so many images in my mind.

  10. Nancy February 16th, 2008 11:10 am

    Now that’s a pretty haiku! Goes well with the photo image, too.

  11. qualcosa di bello February 16th, 2008 9:16 pm

    the thought of moonlight sighs is so dreamy…the yearning in this is so beautiful

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