Amputated Moon

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Feb 23

Pam(ela)

Category: My Poetry

Mostly it’s just Pam

one syllable

beginning with a puff of air

ending with a hum

 

It has been Pamela

on important papers in my life

birth, baptism, marriage,

driver’s license, tax statements

                                      

Only a handful

have ever called out

Pammie

it feels like something from the past

 

My father wrote to

Pammie

while he did tours of duty

in Viet Nam

 

A friend

recently deceased

also called me Pammie

I can hear her say it in my mind

 

I have wanted to change it

maybe to Kristine

but the change never

had the chance to stick

 

So I will remain Pam

short and to the point

beginning with a kiss of air

ending with a hum of song

Pamela Olson, 2/23/08

 

This poem was written as a response to a prompt from Poem, a virtual poetry group.

6 comments

6 Comments so far

  1. Linda Jacobs February 23rd, 2008 8:42 am

    Love the puff and kiss of air and the hum! Also, your acceptance of your name reminds me of me coming to terms with Linda, finally. Nicely done!

  2. Deb(orah) Vatcher February 23rd, 2008 10:39 am

    I enjoyed this poem, and relate to it as a Deb(by)(orah).
    Came here via Poets Who Blog and am very impressed by your work here.

  3. carolee February 23rd, 2008 11:24 am

    i also love the puff and hum. great way to use the sound of a name, not just its meaning! welcome to “poem”

  4. Noah February 23rd, 2008 6:30 pm

    That’s clever. It’s strange how our names kind of change and then change back or don’t change or whatever.

  5. cynthia February 26th, 2008 7:33 am

    I like this poem – she’s charming – wonderful how you
    add in the people in your life and how they called your name,
    the difference this made to your life.

  6. sister AE February 26th, 2008 8:57 pm

    I like this! I particularly like that “puff of air” as a description for the “P” – something my choir director would love for us to do better!

    I’m here from Poets Who Blog.

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