Comments on: Pam(ela) http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/ poetry, nature, writing (all writing is the property of the writer and should be considerd copywritten) Mon, 08 Mar 2010 06:19:37 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: sister AE http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/comment-page-1/#comment-150 sister AE Wed, 27 Feb 2008 02:57:32 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/#comment-150 I like this! I particularly like that "puff of air" as a description for the "P" - something my choir director would love for us to do better! I'm here from Poets Who Blog. I like this! I particularly like that “puff of air” as a description for the “P” – something my choir director would love for us to do better!

I’m here from Poets Who Blog.

]]> By: cynthia http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/comment-page-1/#comment-149 cynthia Tue, 26 Feb 2008 13:33:04 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/#comment-149 I like this poem - she's charming - wonderful how you add in the people in your life and how they called your name, the difference this made to your life. I like this poem – she’s charming – wonderful how you
add in the people in your life and how they called your name,
the difference this made to your life.

]]> By: Noah http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/comment-page-1/#comment-126 Noah Sun, 24 Feb 2008 00:30:56 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/#comment-126 That's clever. It's strange how our names kind of change and then change back or don't change or whatever. That’s clever. It’s strange how our names kind of change and then change back or don’t change or whatever.

]]> By: carolee http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/comment-page-1/#comment-124 carolee Sat, 23 Feb 2008 17:24:22 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/#comment-124 i also love the puff and hum. great way to use the sound of a name, not just its meaning! welcome to "poem" i also love the puff and hum. great way to use the sound of a name, not just its meaning! welcome to “poem”

]]> By: Deb(orah) Vatcher http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/comment-page-1/#comment-123 Deb(orah) Vatcher Sat, 23 Feb 2008 16:39:24 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/#comment-123 I enjoyed this poem, and relate to it as a Deb(by)(orah). Came here via Poets Who Blog and am very impressed by your work here. I enjoyed this poem, and relate to it as a Deb(by)(orah).
Came here via Poets Who Blog and am very impressed by your work here.

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/comment-page-1/#comment-122 Linda Jacobs Sat, 23 Feb 2008 14:42:15 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/02/23/pamela/#comment-122 Love the puff and kiss of air and the hum! Also, your acceptance of your name reminds me of me coming to terms with Linda, finally. Nicely done! Love the puff and kiss of air and the hum! Also, your acceptance of your name reminds me of me coming to terms with Linda, finally. Nicely done!

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