Amputated Moon

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Feb 24

Valley of Bones*

Category: My Poetry

The Lord set me down in the valley,

            the fertile crescent beginning.

 

It was full of bones:     clavicle, carpal, calcaneus

            lying in the valley:       fabella, femur, fibula

                        and they were very dry.          hamate, hyoid, humerus

 

He led me around them:         ilum, incus, lacrimal

            in a slow dance:          parietal, patella

                        kicking up the bone dust:        sacrum, scapula, sternum

            stirring the breath of God.       tibia, talus, turbinate

 

Can these bones live?

 

Higher, higher they are piled

            800,000-plus dry bones

                        wrapped with sacred cloth:     red, whte and blue

            young, strong bones

groaning in their sorrowful hymn.

 

Still I dance around

            Seventeen-million more bones

                        lying on their natal ground.

 

And the dust swirls

            forming a cloud of garnet

                        raising the scent of blood.

 

Listen, mortal,

            your brother’s blood

                        your sister’s blood is crying,

crying out to me from the ground.

 

The sobs form the walls of this valley

            and its rhythm-beat

                        drives your dance.

 

Then He said to me,

            Prophesy to these bones, mortal.

 

So I prophesy.

            The bones fall together

                        end to end:      metatarsal, malleus

            bone to bone:  maxilla, vertebrae

sinews and flesh echo in the waiting silence.

 

Prophesy to the breath, mortal.

 

I prophesy,

            and the breath comes             from the north

                        and the breath comes             from the south

            and the breath comes             from the east

and the breath comes             from  the west

 

The dead cry out—

            our bones are dry,

                        our hope is lost;

each hour more join our valley with no end in sight.

 

Who will see us?

            Who will hear us?

                        Who will bring us peace?

 

And the Lord said,

            Prophesy mortal, prophesy.

 

*Based on Ezekial 37.  Bone numbers are derived from Iraqi Body Count and US military deaths multiplied by the number of bones in the human body.

7 Comments so far

  1. cynthia February 24th, 2008 4:17 pm

    a rich and profound poem, i truly hope this poem is
    published somewhere soon and read by all

  2. Noah February 24th, 2008 5:50 pm

    What a fascinating piece. The form is wonderful.

  3. Crafty Green Poet February 25th, 2008 2:53 am

    This is wonderful, I love the many layers in it and how you use the names of the bones. Excellent, well worth rereading

  4. The Phantom February 25th, 2008 7:38 pm

    I love the layout. I always pay particular attention to layout, punctuation, and capitalization but this is spectacular. I’m glad you were featured on Poets who Blog or I might have missed this.

  5. Dányi Dániel February 28th, 2008 6:30 am

    strongly rhythmic and musical, is what I most like about this brave and ecstatic poem, well-spaced as it is visually, very good!

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  7. Deb Vatcher March 24th, 2008 5:00 pm

    Poets must say what has to be said about war and suffering. Thank you for directing me to this powerful poem.

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