Feb 25
Ink
Crow flies in near dusk
inky streaks across the sky
the shadow-bird nears
Pamela Olson, 2/25/08
This poem was written in
response to the prompt
from Haiku: One Deep Breath.
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Feb 25
Crow flies in near dusk
inky streaks across the sky
the shadow-bird nears
Pamela Olson, 2/25/08
This poem was written in
response to the prompt
from Haiku: One Deep Breath.
This is beautiful. Not sad, but very contemplative for me. Crows as shadow-birds are very evocative for me. Our submission can be found here. Thank you for visiting.
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Beautiful.
love the ’shadow-bird’ reference. Nice work!
Pam
This poem ends where the crow begins in my imagination! Wonderful stuff.
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wow, the picture compliments these words well.
Beautiful, I love crows
Nice approach. To focus on something that appears like ink as opposed to ink itself. I love the idea of a ’shadow-bird’.
a wonderful take…imagination taking flight
Nice work, Pam … like the best Haiku, it has a flow, a thrust from initial to final concept. Not all that easy to do in seven syllables.
Great take on the prompt. The image is quite striking.