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Feb 25

Ink

Category: Tanka and Haiku

crow-2.jpg

Crow flies in near dusk

inky streaks across the sky

the shadow-bird nears

Pamela Olson, 2/25/08

 

This poem was written in

response to the prompt

from Haiku: One Deep Breath.

10 Comments so far

  1. Andrée & Michael February 25th, 2008 8:00 pm

    This is beautiful. Not sad, but very contemplative for me. Crows as shadow-birds are very evocative for me. Our submission can be found here. Thank you for visiting.

    Thank you, also, for visiting One Single Impression. I have added you to the blogroll.

  2. Noah February 25th, 2008 8:44 pm

    Beautiful.

  3. Tumblewords February 25th, 2008 8:48 pm

    love the ’shadow-bird’ reference. Nice work!

  4. SandyCarlson February 25th, 2008 9:08 pm

    Pam
    This poem ends where the crow begins in my imagination! Wonderful stuff.

    Thanks for your encouraging words at One Single Illusion!

  5. Sara February 25th, 2008 10:08 pm

    wow, the picture compliments these words well.

  6. Crafty Green Poet February 26th, 2008 2:44 am

    Beautiful, I love crows

  7. jem February 26th, 2008 5:33 am

    Nice approach. To focus on something that appears like ink as opposed to ink itself. I love the idea of a ’shadow-bird’.

  8. qualcosa di bello February 26th, 2008 5:39 am

    a wonderful take…imagination taking flight

  9. Rick February 26th, 2008 10:29 pm

    Nice work, Pam … like the best Haiku, it has a flow, a thrust from initial to final concept. Not all that easy to do in seven syllables.

  10. spacedlaw February 27th, 2008 12:45 pm

    Great take on the prompt. The image is quite striking.

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