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Archive for March 2nd, 2008

Passing Notes

March 02nd, 2008 | Category: My Poetry

Vet your words carefullynotepassing.jpg

simple-meaning

without metaphor or simile

 

Lose the articles, adjectives,

and adverbs

try to use symbols

 

Choose a small bit of paper

little more

than a scrap of trash

 

Hold the teacher’s attention

with your eyes

and your words

 

Then just let the note

slide. . .

and trust that he will find it.

Pamela Olson, 3/2/08

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