Amputated Moon

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Mar 13

Downsized

Category: My Poetry

Leave your house

lose your pets

sell your stuff

downsize to just

a rented apartment

 

change in career

(not mine)

choices made

another journey

has begun

 

children uprooted

new job

lost friends

smaller walls

just numb

 

Pamela Olson, 3/13/08

This is a memory poem from a move ten years ago written for Three Word Wednesday’s prompt to use the words apartment, began (I used the past tense), and numb. 9 comments

9 Comments so far

  1. TC March 13th, 2008 8:59 am

    Feels like a lot of people went this route this week. Very obvious I think, as the words almost seemed to call for it.

  2. Pam March 13th, 2008 9:27 am

    Yeah, I couldn’t find a way to be really creative with the words this week, so I rehashed my move to Georgia for my husband to attend seminary. Maybe next week’s words will be more inspiring.

  3. Deb Vatcher March 13th, 2008 9:50 am

    Your poem really struck “home” with me, as I get older and feel that as we age we can’t always manage everything we took on in our youth–big house–pets. Downsizing can have a liberating feel to it as well. Freedom from all the “stuff” that we seem to accumulate over the years.

  4. gautami tripathy March 13th, 2008 10:26 am

    This is going to happen to me i amonth or so! Touched by it!

    Can it get any worse than this?

  5. Noah March 13th, 2008 2:27 pm

    Ugh. As much as I hate living in my house, I know it’s gonna be a horror story when I leave.

  6. paisley March 13th, 2008 7:08 pm

    this is becoming an all to familair scenario in these tought times for young families… i do hope it all worked out for you in the end… it always saddens me when people move and their pets become expendable tho…

  7. Pam March 14th, 2008 6:33 am

    Paisley, it did work out and it was a cleansing to get rid of so much (not the pets- that was unfair but necessary). My husband finished seminary in 2001 and we are back in a house with three cats and two dogs.

  8. sherry March 14th, 2008 8:52 am

    Life changes…some we create, some are thrust upon us. And we adapt and we “downsize”. This was quite good!

  9. One More Believer March 14th, 2008 6:13 pm

    oh man, at 3 this morning when the little kitty dinah was running over my bed and wanted to play and the dog was chasing her.. umm, i was thinking i am so outta here!!!… everybody out… and it was trash day yesterday… too bad… how poignant a poem…

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