Apr 8
Shade Lune (a variation)
the road curves
into the dark evergreen forest
cool shade waits
Pamela Olson, 4/8/07
This form is a variation on the Lune written for the prompt at Poefusion.
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Apr 8
the road curves
into the dark evergreen forest
cool shade waits
Pamela Olson, 4/8/07
This form is a variation on the Lune written for the prompt at Poefusion.
4 comments
Good morning, Pam~ You’ve written a lune filled with mystery and intrigue. I wonder what lies inside the forest waiting for our arrival? Beautiful. Have a nice day.
nice job.. this was a great little starter to get the juices flowing for the day wasn’t it????
Lovely lune with intrigue and anticipation. Thanks for sharing it.
The last line is pure awesome.