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Apr 8

Shade Lune (a variation)

Category: My Poetry

the road curves

into the dark evergreen forest

cool shade waits

 

Pamela Olson, 4/8/07

 

This form is a variation on the Lune written for the prompt at Poefusion.

4 comments

4 Comments so far

  1. Michelle Johnson April 8th, 2008 6:09 am

    Good morning, Pam~ You’ve written a lune filled with mystery and intrigue. I wonder what lies inside the forest waiting for our arrival? Beautiful. Have a nice day.

  2. paisley April 8th, 2008 6:13 am

    nice job.. this was a great little starter to get the juices flowing for the day wasn’t it????

  3. Scott April 8th, 2008 4:15 pm

    Lovely lune with intrigue and anticipation. Thanks for sharing it.

  4. Noah April 8th, 2008 6:25 pm

    The last line is pure awesome.

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