Amputated Moon

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Apr 21

Sea and Sky

Category: My Poetry

sea and sky are one

            blue and blue

            lost in each other

 

            water and air

            kiss in mist

differences dissolve

 

Pamela Olson

 

This poem is in response to the

prompt “colors” at One Single Impression.

13 Comments so far

  1. Raven April 21st, 2008 10:08 am

    Beautiful photo and beautiful poem. I live the idea of water and air kissing in the mist. Exquisite.

  2. Tumblewords April 21st, 2008 10:21 am

    Fine photo and lovely words, as always. I always enjoy my visits here!

  3. Aud April 21st, 2008 10:25 am

    The photo looks beautiful. And I like the first verse. Simple and yet seem to describe much.

  4. SandyCarlson April 21st, 2008 11:44 am

    The merging of sea and sky is always a wonderful mystery to me. You have captured it so well. Thanks.

  5. TeriC April 21st, 2008 2:06 pm

    I love that line, ‘blue and blue lost in each other’. Such a wonderful way to describe the horizon.

  6. Quietpaths April 21st, 2008 4:34 pm

    Oh, do I love this. It’s concrete and ephemeral both in words and photo. Lost in each other is an inspired image.

  7. Noah April 21st, 2008 6:43 pm

    Absolutely beautiful.

  8. Scott April 22nd, 2008 4:52 am

    I have often admired the image you portray so well. I love the “kiss in mist” line.

  9. MyBellavia April 22nd, 2008 5:05 am

    Both are esquisite! I love “blue and blue”.

  10. Billy April 22nd, 2008 9:05 am

    “Differences dissolve.” This is a lovely piece of work with great theme.

  11. WillThink4Wine April 23rd, 2008 8:51 am

    This is stunningly beautiful. ‘water and air kiss in the mist’ is brilliant!

  12. lissa April 23rd, 2008 9:50 am

    wonderful!

  13. zoya gautam April 24th, 2008 6:43 pm

    ..lines..that take away the blues..softly..thanks

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