Comments on: Dance with the Unknown http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/05/07/dance-with-the-unknown/ poetry, nature, writing (all writing is the property of the writer and should be considerd copywritten) Mon, 08 Mar 2010 06:19:37 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Bone http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/05/07/dance-with-the-unknown/comment-page-1/#comment-613 Bone Mon, 12 May 2008 23:01:05 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=188#comment-613 That is a gorgeous piece of poetry. Love the line "dance with maybe." That is a gorgeous piece of poetry. Love the line “dance with maybe.”

]]> By: Ralph Murre http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/05/07/dance-with-the-unknown/comment-page-1/#comment-594 Ralph Murre Thu, 08 May 2008 15:44:22 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=188#comment-594 "dance with maybe" . . . perfect! “dance with maybe” . . . perfect!

]]> By: TC http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/05/07/dance-with-the-unknown/comment-page-1/#comment-593 TC Thu, 08 May 2008 13:37:28 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=188#comment-593 This reminds me of the song "Leap of Faith." Very enjoyable. This reminds me of the song “Leap of Faith.”

Very enjoyable.

]]> By: Gemma http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/05/07/dance-with-the-unknown/comment-page-1/#comment-592 Gemma Thu, 08 May 2008 10:25:23 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=188#comment-592 What an uplifting posting! Gemma What an uplifting posting!

Gemma

]]> By: Rick http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/05/07/dance-with-the-unknown/comment-page-1/#comment-590 Rick Thu, 08 May 2008 05:38:26 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=188#comment-590 I like the mirrored strophes on either end. In literary criticism, it's called an "inclusio." I like the mirrored strophes on either end. In literary criticism, it’s called an “inclusio.”

]]> By: Noah http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/05/07/dance-with-the-unknown/comment-page-1/#comment-589 Noah Thu, 08 May 2008 00:14:30 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=188#comment-589 Impulse can be good. Good write! Impulse can be good.

Good write!

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