Amputated Moon

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May 16

Trapped

Category: My Poetry

We found the gull

you and I

as we walked along the beach

choked with driftwood

tossed so easily from wave to sand

during the winter rages

 

it was just there

eyeing us as we passed by

letting us be far too close

casting our shadows

gray and soft

on the cloudy day

 

the strands of fishing line

sparkled in the brief light

the sun finding its way

out of the maze of

cloud and mist

to strike the line at the right time

 

fishing line woven around wings

left by some tourist

or another who doesn’t know

the danger of leaving

seemingly innocuous

bits of this civilization behind

 

woven into an accidental net

to capture the gull here

on the sand and driftwood

not in the sky free-wheeling

along the dunes

and the waves

 

caught close to the earth

in this dangerous world

feet firmly planted

wingspan reduced

the gull becomes

just one of us

 

here on this beach

 

Pamela Olson, 5/16/08

This poem was written for the prompt

“wingspan” at Easystreet Prompts

4 Comments so far

  1. Crafty Green Poet May 16th, 2008 8:08 am

    a very sad commentary on how we treat the earth, how careless we are.

  2. Jo May 16th, 2008 8:13 am

    Pamela, the whole is lovely but the closing three are excellent.

  3. Jo May 16th, 2008 8:14 am

    I mean from woven into an accidental net.

  4. Pam May 16th, 2008 9:21 am

    This is a memory poem from one of my first early spring walks on the beach. My son and I came across the gull but couldn’t calm it and free it at the same time. Another local man joined us and we were able to cut all the line off the gull.

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