Comments on: Partly Cloudy

By: christine

christine — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 01:59:16 +0000

The spare, tender lines are just right for the eternal love you see in the painting, and describe so well in your poem.

maryt/theteach — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 20:31:59 +0000

Pamela, your words of poetry expand my appreciation of the painting! Thank you very much!

Lirone — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 17:53:33 +0000

Like this – particularly the line “the temperature rises” which links the lovers and the summer

Noah — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 15:40:32 +0000

I really like this piece. I read it a few times, and keep reading it again.

Mon, 23 Jun 2008 11:49:26 +0000

“she flirts with the blushing sun”… love that

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