Amputated Moon

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Jun 23

Fashionista Dreams

Category: My Poetry

she dreams each night

of the newest finds

in her daily haunts

of the up-and-coming boutiques

 

she feels the heft of the chains

around her neck

aslant on her hip

all uncommon rattle

 

the fabric drapes itself

over her slim shoulders

and her breastless torso

no curves to pull at the lines

 

will she find the perfect look

when she wakes

or will she only

wander the streets and dream

 

Pamela Olson, 6/23/08

 

This poem is in response to

Monday Mural at Poefusion

Art is by Hilm Daniele

5 Comments so far

  1. nan de June 23rd, 2008 10:44 pm

    Hello Pam, I found you here at amputated moon and wanted to let you know you how much I like your poetry - esp. your tanka and haiku…

    n

  2. Michelle Johnson June 24th, 2008 6:18 am

    When she wakes I think she should still be able to dream of what she wants. I think that is what keeps us alive is our dreaming, no matter how big or small. thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.

  3. Lirone June 24th, 2008 6:30 am

    Interesting that you also saw a female figure in this abstract picture… works into a good poem. A rather sad life that dreams only of fashion!

  4. Noah June 24th, 2008 7:41 am

    Ooh, I’m not a girl, so I’ve never thought like that.

  5. Cynthia June 27th, 2008 1:33 pm

    I love when my dreams are of clothing, this poem speaks to my
    love of fashion.

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