thin-stripped flat land
mountains above
waves below
always on edge
the ocean digests
each rock and pebble
shaken loose
by wind and rain
fatal erosions
rumors of end times
war against nature
war against man
before the apocalypse
spontaneous visions
dark dreams
then comes the final quake
Pamela Olson, 6/25/08
Written for the prompt
A stark vision there.
Timely, I thought.
Quite ominous thoughts, which, sadly, ring with disturbing, possible truth.
Great take on the prompt!
There do seem to be signs of the apocalypse. Very well put.
Oh my this seems to be quite the talk lately, no?
Pam,
We do seem to be the creators of our own demise.
rel
beautiful… for such dark times to come…
Well done! This piece rings with truth, whether one believes or not! Nice writing!
Ooh! Prophetic!