Aug 15
A River Waits
the river waits
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mouth to sea
salt and fresh water
intimate liquids
I rest by its side Pamela Olson, 8/14/08 A Tanka for Three Word Wednesday6 Comments so far
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Aug 15
mouth to sea
salt and fresh water
intimate liquids
I rest by its side Pamela Olson, 8/14/08 A Tanka for Three Word Wednesday
I like the image in your tanka of the river waiting to be noticed by the sea while their waters mingle. Very nice.
water and intimacy. lovely words and image.
“the river waits / mouth to sea” – I love both the sound and image of this and the mingling of the “intimate liquids”
I like the way the curve of the words echoes the curve of the shore in the photo – a beautiful pair.
elegant and sparse, by favorite, what a beauty.
The shortness of it enhances the affect!
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