Amputated Moon

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Aug 15

A River Waits

Category: Tanka and Haiku
Pistol River Oregon
Pistol River Oregon
the river waits

mouth to sea

salt and fresh water

intimate liquids

I rest by its side   Pamela Olson, 8/14/08 A Tanka for Three Word Wednesday
6 comments

6 Comments so far

  1. Rae Trigg August 15th, 2008 9:12 pm

    I like the image in your tanka of the river waiting to be noticed by the sea while their waters mingle. Very nice.

  2. scatterhaiku August 16th, 2008 12:24 am

    water and intimacy. lovely words and image. :)

  3. Leonard Blumfeld August 16th, 2008 1:10 am

    “the river waits / mouth to sea” – I love both the sound and image of this and the mingling of the “intimate liquids”

  4. Deborah Godin August 16th, 2008 6:51 am

    I like the way the curve of the words echoes the curve of the shore in the photo – a beautiful pair.

  5. Jade August 16th, 2008 7:38 am

    elegant and sparse, by favorite, what a beauty.

  6. gautami tripathy August 17th, 2008 10:30 am

    The shortness of it enhances the affect!

    Reflecting on writers groups

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