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Aug 25

Strings

Category: My Poetry
Strings by LadySnape09

Strings by LadySnape09

the strings of the violin

bow-stroked

are sent shivering

 

dancing in their own rhythm

sine waves traveling

slower than light

 

passing through dimensions

pushing the quarks aside

charmed and strange

 

leptons ride along

colors broken apart

music is born

 

Pamela Olson, 8/25/08

 

This poem was inspired by

Monday Mural at Poefusion

9 comments

9 Comments so far

  1. Quietpaths August 25th, 2008 10:39 am

    Being a musician of both keyboard and viola I can say you’ve captured some real magic here. That last stanza is so great. I always play a game with myself as to what key the earth is tuned to… over my life that key changes.

  2. Deborah Godin August 25th, 2008 4:04 pm

    Beautiful evocation of physics, number and music!

  3. Cynthia August 25th, 2008 7:04 pm

    I feel to be inside the violin, very unique and pretty poem,
    especially like the delicious vocabulary.

  4. Rick August 26th, 2008 7:32 am

    Leptons … cool.

  5. Brendan August 26th, 2008 9:15 am

    Who sez physicians can’t dance?

  6. Young American Poets August 26th, 2008 5:37 pm

    very nice. we love the way you combine verse and image, always

  7. gautami tripathy August 28th, 2008 9:23 am

    The third stanza jumps out for me! Great going.

    making inroads into I know what not

  8. Jade August 31st, 2008 5:52 am

    you given me a sensual and alive violin.

  9. Nick harvey August 31st, 2008 6:34 am

    This is very nice!

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