Comments on: Don’t Look Over There

By: Jade

Jade — Sat, 06 Sep 2008 04:25:55 +0000

the shrouding of truth, well written.

Geraldine — Wed, 03 Sep 2008 22:09:13 +0000

There is always so much more than what we think we see, on the surface. YOu have captured this so well. Excellent. G

Nathan — Wed, 03 Sep 2008 09:22:55 +0000

I like the sentiment as much as your use of language. Your imagination took this painting to a place I didn’t expect.

Nathalie (Spacedlaw) — Wed, 03 Sep 2008 08:11:36 +0000

Nothing has changed much since the “bread and circus” distractions provided by the Roman emperors…
Moving poetry (lovely painting too).

kouji — Wed, 03 Sep 2008 06:40:49 +0000

lovely lines. hopefully people will look.

Sandy — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 21:05:00 +0000

Your poem reminds me of last year’s hurricane in New Orleans. Thank God, we have not forgotten.

zoya gautam — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 20:52:59 +0000

..”profound and provocative”..
many thanks..

Tumblewords — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 17:43:07 +0000

Very good. So many layers and undertones, profound and provocative.

Brendan — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 15:14:03 +0000

This is about as good as a poem which may or not be political can be.

patois — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 13:38:09 +0000

If only I could bring myself to “look and see” more often. Very sad poem, but beautifully done.