Amputated Moon

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Oct 31

Dia’ de los Muertos

Category: My Poetry

The dead are whispering

with the fallen leaves,

their voices dry and rasp.

 

Moths in a spider’s web;

the bodies shriveled

but papered wings hold fast.

 

At tide’s edge, waves rise high

up and over the sand

where driftwood bones are cast.

 

And the moon overflows

a dark eastern sky

filled with copper and brass.

 

This, the day of the dead

is upon us all—

death over life surpassed.

 

Pamela Olson, 10/31/08

 

 

5 comments

5 Comments so far

  1. Art and Poetry October 31st, 2008 10:47 am

    Whispering leaves!!

  2. Tumblewords October 31st, 2008 1:09 pm

    Beautiful! Wonderful rhythm and easy rhyme. The imagery is lovely.

  3. Deborah Godin October 31st, 2008 2:13 pm

    Darkly beautiful and quietly sombre, a mood and tone I especially admire.

  4. mandy November 2nd, 2008 3:13 am

    Very succinct and causes me to smile.

  5. Jane Doe November 2nd, 2008 5:11 am

    Wonderfully, delightfully dark and vivid! A fantastic poem.

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