Amputated Moon

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Nov 29

The Rain— A Dream

Category: My Poetry

Somewhere—in silence—

the rain has gone

evidence of its visit

found in the brown grass

thirsty for it

found in the fog

left against the field

 

Here—- in silence—

day creeps into existence

silver and soft

hidden deep in the mist

that no breeze stirs

the rain— a dream

fading with the night

 

Pamela Olson, 11/29/08

 

Line from “The Complete Poems of Emily Dickinson”

edited by Thomas H. Johnson; Poem #338

 

 

4 comments

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  1. Art and Poetry November 29th, 2008 10:05 am

    Very nice! goes well with the picture

  2. Deborah Godin November 30th, 2008 2:49 pm

    A beautiul moment, and one of my very favorites – transitions of light, temperature, atmosphere, seasons. I always look forward to your Emily Dickinson poems.

  3. Jannie December 1st, 2008 4:11 am

    silver and soft, such a way with words for sure she had.

  4. lissa December 3rd, 2008 9:02 am

    dreamy imaginary, one can almost feel the isolation, the doubt it seem to create about the rain

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