Amputated Moon

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Dec 23

If You Forget Me (for Rick)

Category: My Poetry
Time

Time

look

at the space between

heart and soul

where memories

are lodged

like driftwood

tossed here and there

on the sand

in the rip rap

that carefully-laid

thoroughly-planned

erosion barrier

 

find

the time we walked

along the waterfront

holding hands

smelling the salt air

tasting the fish and chips

hearing the ferry’s harsh horn

the colors and sounds of the city

here is the recording

of our words

set sail on the tidal currents

departing on schedule

 

see

hiding in the crook

of the sea-smoothed branch

the long road across country

all the small words

that passed between

you and I

they are soft

worn out by time

they are feathers

that drift up from the sand

and into the pewter sky

 

Pamela Olson 12/23/08

 

Monday Mural (image by CasallArt)

and Tuesday Title, “If you forget me”

at Poefusion

 

4 comments

4 Comments so far

  1. Michelle Johnson December 23rd, 2008 12:56 pm

    Pam, this is a beautiful tribute to Rick. Anyone with a sentimental heart can relate to this poem. Thanks for sharing such tender words. Have a nice day.

  2. Rick December 23rd, 2008 1:23 pm

    This is beautiful. Thank you.

  3. Deborah Godin December 23rd, 2008 1:35 pm

    Your words a beautiful, and as soft as a whispered echo. The artwork accompanying it is lovely, the details when enlarged are amazing!

  4. lissa December 23rd, 2008 8:21 pm

    lovely, I like the last part the best, the words between people are often more memorable than places

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