Comments on: The Weight of the Ordinary http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/ poetry, nature, writing (all writing is the property of the writer and should be considerd copywritten) Mon, 08 Mar 2010 06:19:37 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Melody http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2304 Melody Wed, 31 Dec 2008 04:21:08 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2304 I have to add to what many have already said, your last stanza is perfect, bringing it all together. Wonderful piece. I have to add to what many have already said, your last stanza is perfect, bringing it all together. Wonderful piece.

]]> By: Jo http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2281 Jo Sat, 27 Dec 2008 18:22:13 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2281 Hi Pam, The last stanza is beautiful, really beautiful. I wanted to stop by and thank you for the kind comment on ouroboros. And for the link. Happy holidays, jo Hi Pam,

The last stanza is beautiful, really beautiful. I wanted to stop by and thank you for the kind comment on ouroboros. And for the link.

Happy holidays,

jo

]]> By: angel http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2278 angel Fri, 26 Dec 2008 23:51:47 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2278 This was great. Wonderful take on that night. This was great. Wonderful take on that night.

]]> By: JO Janoski http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2273 JO Janoski Fri, 26 Dec 2008 00:49:18 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2273 I love the way you've meshed humanness and spirituality to paint a lasting picture to be treasured. I love the way you’ve meshed humanness and spirituality to paint a lasting picture to be treasured.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2270 gautami tripathy Thu, 25 Dec 2008 16:23:26 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2270 Beautiful. A new life is a miracle. Each time. <a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/12/symmetry-in-poetry-or-what.html" rel="nofollow">symmetry in poetry or what?</a> Beautiful. A new life is a miracle. Each time.

symmetry in poetry or what?

]]> By: Goose http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2267 Goose Thu, 25 Dec 2008 08:14:28 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2267 So much wrapped up in a handful of words. Very nice. So much wrapped up in a handful of words. Very nice.

]]> By: pjd http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2266 pjd Thu, 25 Dec 2008 07:46:34 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2266 Yes, you bring it home very well. I especially like "this night is balanced" which hangs there on its own, then is sliced unexpectedly by the continuation on the next line. Personally, even though it would drop the word "faith," I might like the poem even more if you just had the first three stanzas with the final one. Yes, you bring it home very well. I especially like “this night is balanced” which hangs there on its own, then is sliced unexpectedly by the continuation on the next line. Personally, even though it would drop the word “faith,” I might like the poem even more if you just had the first three stanzas with the final one.

]]> By: Deborah Godin http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2264 Deborah Godin Wed, 24 Dec 2008 22:37:43 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2264 that razor, that edge - speaks volumes! that razor, that edge – speaks volumes!

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2263 Linda Jacobs Wed, 24 Dec 2008 21:47:43 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2263 Awesomely poetic! And, yes, that last paragraph is so good! Awesomely poetic!

And, yes, that last paragraph is so good!

]]> By: Heather http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2008/12/24/the-weight-of-the-ordinary/comment-page-1/#comment-2261 Heather Wed, 24 Dec 2008 17:26:34 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=482#comment-2261 Oh, I love this so much. I have chills. Absolutely astounding. Oh, I love this so much. I have chills. Absolutely astounding.

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