Amputated Moon

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Mar 7

Dervish

Category: My Poetry

whirling-dervish

spinning in an orbit

waiting for the next shift

of balance and rhythm

 

gravitational pull

lines up the heavens

while you spin

 

a dance of ecstasy

alone in a desire

for the touch of mystery

 

when the Holy arrives as

a whisper on your cheek

words pulsing in your ear

 

does the spinning stop

when you simply walk

feet bare toward the light

 

Pamela Olson, 3/7/09

 

For One Single Impression

 

5 comments

5 Comments so far

  1. Tammie March 7th, 2009 10:52 am

    Beautiful poem~
    thank you for sharing what this dance can be like, I was never sure. It sounds as though you do this dance? So many ways on the path to the light.

  2. patois March 7th, 2009 3:59 pm

    Such fabulous imagery here.

  3. if March 7th, 2009 7:15 pm

    that is a nice image about dancing and spining up…

  4. SandyCalson March 7th, 2009 10:24 pm

    Oh, to take that walk!

  5. Patti March 8th, 2009 7:49 am

    What a beautiful poem Pam! Your words and picture match up perfectly. Thanks so much for the kind advice you left the other day- so very appreciated!

    Patti

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