Amputated Moon

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Apr 6

Sound Control

Category: My Poetry
Winter Wonderland

Winter Wonderland

winter has silenced the city

all that is heard is the low groan

rising from the icy lake

 

the ice has devoured

shouts from crowds of people

crossing streets or hailing taxis

 

casual conversations

cell phones—all are locked

within the bonds of frozen water

 

car motors and horns

are layered between

water and ice—muted

 

a white-feather-quiet

has descended here

rest your tired ears

 

Pamela Olson, 4/6/09

 

For Read Write Poem’s prompt

“image by Pensiero” Image is Winter

Wonderland

4 comments

4 Comments so far

  1. Danielle April 6th, 2009 1:39 pm

    Oooh- ice devouring sound. Love it.

  2. Linda Jacobs April 6th, 2009 3:00 pm

    It is like that, isn’t it? The hush of winter!

  3. Liz at Yips and Howls April 6th, 2009 7:30 pm

    “The ice has devoured shouts…”: Love that image. Also like:”motors and horns layered between water and ice.”
    Haunting.

  4. Brian April 13th, 2009 11:36 am

    Brings back many not so fond memories. :)

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