
what would happen
if this poem was placed
in a stress position for hours:
lines outstretched
rhythm stilled
words cramping
would this poem talk
if it was covered with a towel
and water was poured over it
would a menacing bark
and possible bite
shape it up into a form
some say you can’t count
on torture to produce truth
but maybe this poem is
a smoking gun. . .
Pamela Olson, 4/27/09
prompt #27 – use some random words
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Intriguing!
I love how you channel desperation into a torture metaphor. You use the details very well. While I wouldn’t advocate waterboarding for people, I do think it pulled out something powerful here.
waterboarding would likely wash the words away
2 weeks ago I was part of a performance of poems by Guantanamo detainees–have you seen the book? I posted a few of the poems on my blog. You might want to check it out.
Very cleverly done and politically relevant too!
That was clever. And it was certainly no torture to read it.
I don’t know what to say except that I really like this. I will be back to read more soon.
superb, wonderful. i wish i had words to express my feelings for this poem.
i take off my hat..