Comments on: A Brief Breath http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/ poetry, nature, writing (all writing is the property of the writer and should be considerd copywritten) Mon, 08 Mar 2010 06:19:37 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: vic http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-10658 vic Fri, 03 Jul 2009 21:16:55 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-10658 I really enjoyed this one as well. Very talented wordsmith. I really enjoyed this one as well. Very talented wordsmith.

]]> By: Meri Arnett-Kremian http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9848 Meri Arnett-Kremian Wed, 17 Jun 2009 14:52:46 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9848 Love your interpretation! Love your interpretation!

]]> By: gabrielle http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9685 gabrielle Fri, 12 Jun 2009 05:06:49 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9685 Magnolias extend their necks in invitation. Rain, breath, petal embrace. Fragrance released in the dip and the rise. certainty in fragility, joy in surrender, infinity in a waltz. Lovely! Magnolias extend their necks in invitation. Rain, breath, petal embrace. Fragrance released in the dip and the rise.
certainty in fragility, joy in surrender, infinity in a waltz.
Lovely!

]]> By: zoya gautam http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9596 zoya gautam Wed, 10 Jun 2009 02:03:57 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9596 a beautiful poem a beautiful poem

]]> By: Deborah Godin http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9585 Deborah Godin Tue, 09 Jun 2009 19:53:12 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9585 Perfect description of one of those breath-holding moments in time and place! Perfect description of one of those breath-holding moments in time and place!

]]> By: Melanie-bd http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9584 Melanie-bd Tue, 09 Jun 2009 17:35:23 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9584 So very lovely. Your images fit each word. Wonderful read. love, Melanie-bd AKA Beloved Haiku Dreams So very lovely. Your images fit each word. Wonderful read.

love, Melanie-bd
AKA Beloved Haiku Dreams

]]> By: Ralph Murre http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9582 Ralph Murre Tue, 09 Jun 2009 16:46:01 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9582 intersection of perfection . . . intersection of perfection . . .

]]> By: DeLi http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9570 DeLi Tue, 09 Jun 2009 04:51:01 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9570 i find it romantic i find it romantic

]]> By: if http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9562 if Tue, 09 Jun 2009 00:18:29 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9562 beautiful poem! beautiful poem!

]]> By: sue http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/07/a-brief-breath/comment-page-1/#comment-9560 sue Mon, 08 Jun 2009 19:08:40 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=852#comment-9560 "breath, rain and petal" -- what a lovely intersection. “breath, rain and petal” — what a lovely intersection.

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