Comments on: Shadow Walls

By: gabrielle

gabrielle — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 04:39:33 +0000

Lovely!!! It is indeed an unsteady ride. I would like to settle in to the sound of frogs singing in the rain.

By: Sandy

Sandy — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 20:58:00 +0000

Beautiful, there is something about shadows that is so appealing.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 04:08:50 +0000

Wonderful…

By: Tammie

Tammie — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 00:13:26 +0000

the first stanza reads (to me) as though it were an incantation.
wonderful

By: if

if — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 22:32:55 +0000

interesting poem and beautiful picture

By: lissa

lissa — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 17:03:19 +0000

I read it as someone lost in between the days and finding it hard to differentiate what’s real and what’s false

By: Michelle Johnson

Michelle Johnson — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 16:28:56 +0000

Hello Pam~ Your poem makes me think how someone would take sanctuary in death. The stone walls that surround them, cover them. The comfort that comes from these walls. Well done. Have a great day.

By: Deborah Godin

Deborah Godin — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 15:40:58 +0000

Sometimes, the more a like a poem of yours, the harder it is to say how much I admire it, enjoy it, am amazed by it…like this one. Adjective fail sometimes.

By: SandyCarlson

SandyCarlson — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 15:01:40 +0000

I love the imagination at work here. What a great piece.

By: Edward S. Gault

Edward S. Gault — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 08:05:53 +0000

A very different view of walls-excellent poem and pic!