Comments on: Assimilation http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/ poetry, nature, writing (all writing is the property of the writer and should be considerd copywritten) Mon, 08 Mar 2010 06:19:37 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Nathalie (Spacedlaw) http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10253 Nathalie (Spacedlaw) Wed, 24 Jun 2009 13:23:47 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10253 I love your assimilation, it is very poignant and sensual. I love your assimilation, it is very poignant and sensual.

]]> By: Tammie http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10250 Tammie Wed, 24 Jun 2009 05:39:53 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10250 my goodness, you have touched the essence of life within me. Your words, your insight, your ability to seek deeply is rich! I loved these lines: part sunlight part whisper my goodness, you have touched the essence of life within me. Your words, your insight, your ability to seek deeply is rich!
I loved these lines:

part sunlight

part whisper

]]> By: patois http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10242 patois Tue, 23 Jun 2009 13:54:17 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10242 That is magnificent. Truly a delight. "I will weave myself between your molecules" stands out so strongly. That is magnificent. Truly a delight. “I will weave myself between your molecules” stands out so strongly.

]]> By: gabrielle http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10237 gabrielle Tue, 23 Jun 2009 05:19:31 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10237 I can see the contour of the body ancient and stolid. And the whispers that sing in the field of stones. The imagery is stunning! I can see the contour of the body ancient and stolid. And the whispers that sing in the field of stones.

The imagery is stunning!

]]> By: Tumblewords http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10235 Tumblewords Tue, 23 Jun 2009 01:21:20 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10235 Ah, a lovely merging. Ah, a lovely merging.

]]> By: Sandy http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10234 Sandy Mon, 22 Jun 2009 19:48:09 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10234 Good luck! I hope it becomes more than a dream. Good luck! I hope it becomes more than a dream.

]]> By: SandyCarlson http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10231 SandyCarlson Mon, 22 Jun 2009 13:21:48 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10231 I love the possibilities of transformation and the intimacy you create here. I love the possibilities of transformation and the intimacy you create here.

]]> By: JanePoet ~ JP/deb http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10227 JanePoet ~ JP/deb Mon, 22 Jun 2009 04:55:36 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10227 Hi Pam, Love this wonderfully visual poem. Nice pairing with the photo as well. Peace, JP/deb Hi Pam,

Love this wonderfully visual poem. Nice pairing with the photo as well.

Peace,
JP/deb

]]> By: The Dark Lord http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10218 The Dark Lord Mon, 22 Jun 2009 02:57:12 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10218 Exquisite!! I just love the beautiful imagery.. Exquisite!! I just love the beautiful imagery..

]]> By: Fledgling Poet http://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/06/21/assimilation/comment-page-1/#comment-10216 Fledgling Poet Mon, 22 Jun 2009 02:32:55 +0000 http://coosacreek.org/amputated/?p=878#comment-10216 I, too, loved the fourth stanza, but the entire poem is gorgeous. Beautiful read! I, too, loved the fourth stanza, but the entire poem is gorgeous. Beautiful read!

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