Amputated Moon

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Jul 8

Meditation

Category: My Poetry
shadowy gloom is clinging to the corners of the room feel the shift in the atmosphere between transparency and deep shadow kneel at the intersection of light and dark pray here meditate on the boundaries within this place pray

Pamela Olson, 7/8/09

For Three Word Wednesday “gloom, kneel, transparent” 11 comments

11 Comments so far

  1. Michelle Johnson July 8th, 2009 8:06 pm

    Pamela this is very spiritual. What better way to come from the gloomy corners of life than to pray. Beautiful. Have a great night.

  2. ThomG July 9th, 2009 7:49 am

    Pamela, sorry for the delay, you got sent to the WordPress spam file. But welcome.

    Loved what you wrote. Very spiritual, yes, and full of feeling. I like this very much.

  3. Noah July 9th, 2009 8:13 am

    This is definitely good, but I’d expect no less from you.

  4. Joseph Harker July 9th, 2009 10:42 am

    Very cool! And the photo definitely gives it an extra bit of mood that really helps get into the feel of it.

    (I posted before that I was adding you to my blogroll, but I think all my comments went to spam that day. Anyway, if you don’t mind, here is another notice. :)

  5. Tumblewords July 9th, 2009 11:37 am

    Nice – this piece does have a feeling of meditation…prayerful and inspirational!

  6. angie July 9th, 2009 7:50 pm

    beautiful, quiet and meditative.

  7. lissa July 10th, 2009 8:40 am

    lots of gloomy 3ww this week but I like yours the best, it’s like a quiet gloom but full of powerful emotions that we can’t let go

  8. pjd July 10th, 2009 5:35 pm

    I love the intersection of light and dark as the place where spirituality is practiced. Lovely yet slightly troubling in the urgency of the voice… very siren-like.

  9. gautami tripathy July 10th, 2009 9:05 pm

    Like it!

    a day in a child’s life

  10. irene July 11th, 2009 11:32 pm

    Hi Pam,

    I’ve got an award for you. I like your words woven into poetry.

    Here’s my post about it

    Blessings,
    Irene

  11. Ray Sharp July 15th, 2009 12:22 pm

    I love your work. This poem speaks to me — intersection of light and dark. Thank you for sharing

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