Jul 18
Thinking
thoughts fall away like leaves kissed by cold nights and short days ideas flowing like a stream eddys and whirlpools circling thoughts upon themselves thoughts as bright as sunlight held tightly within a hand only to be freed again one by one as fingers slowly uncurl
Pamela Olson, 7/18/09 For One Single Impression's prompt, "thinking"3 comments
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That tight hand makes me think of the center of a vortex, the force that pulls and pulls.
I love the freedom expressed in your words. Sometimes it’s difficult to release those thoughts and feelings but when we can it’s freeing. Hope all is well. Have a great day.
Hi Pam, I’ll blame Mr. Linky for missing you last week.
I like this, it aptly describes my fleeting thought pattern to a “T”.
My little note pad records them before they are gone if I can remember to write these thoughts down.
A very nice use of the prompt, thank you.
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