Amputated Moon

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Nov 7

Latitude

Category: My Poetry

Black Warrior in Demopolis, AL

the sun’s opulence slides through the sky

staining and pockmarking the maple leaves

sycamores flaunt bright smooth trunks

while they throw down their leaves– littering the ground

 

the river flows full against its red banks

a summer of rainy days – downpours and drizzles

but the afternoon sunlight cannot lie

it cuts sharply through the atmosphere

 

autumn arrives along the end of the Appalachians

stuttering with starts and stops

warm days and cool nights

shaped by a southern latitude

 

Pamela Olson, 11/7/09

 

Photo – Black Warrior River in Demopolis, Alabama

3 comments

3 Comments so far

  1. Michelle Johnson November 9th, 2009 7:34 am

    simply beautiful in word and picture. have a great day.

  2. Deborah Godin November 9th, 2009 12:13 pm

    You’ve captured the abundance of the season veautifully!

  3. Joseph Harker November 11th, 2009 1:14 pm

    Wasn’t sure if this was intended for the OSI prompt or not, but it works really well… for some reason it makes me think a lot of liquid, especially the sunlight “staining and pockmarking” mixed with the river. Really cool!

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