Jan 25
Disrobed
ah, the sky laid bare
her ermine coat
gathered around her feet
her beauty—strong and simple
floods the river
until it overflows its banks
Pamela Olson, 1/25/2010
For One Single Impression’s
prompt, “sunny days”
Photo – Demopolis, Alabama
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What a beautiful way of putting it…such wonderful imagery!
I like the end… too much beauty can be disastrous, after all. But I like how the sun is implied rather than stated, very nice succinct image.
Delightful imagery.
“The sky laid bare” and Old Sol does his thing and has his fun!
Very nice, Pam.
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Ah, to be flooded with beauty–must be beautiful.
The first stanza is delicious.