Amputated Moon

poetry, nature, writing (all writing is the property of the writer and should be considerd copywritten)

Feb 7

What Remains

Category: My Poetry, Tanka and Haiku

Aspenleaves

soft singular sigh

moves the leaves of the aspen

 

 

the trembling remains

 

 

Pam Olson, 2/7/2010

 

For One Single Impression’s

prompt, “single”

 

For Haiku Bones’

prompt, “breath”

15 comments

15 Comments so far

  1. Anthony North February 7th, 2010 4:16 pm

    Nicely done.

  2. spiritsoflena February 7th, 2010 5:54 pm

    I really loved this haiku; the last line really has a great impact.

  3. rdl February 7th, 2010 6:23 pm

    Nice!!!

  4. angie February 7th, 2010 7:57 pm

    perfect images — beautiful!

  5. Loch Rob February 7th, 2010 9:03 pm

    The sigh and soft breeze both move the aspen. I like the fall colors in your picture and the imagery of your verse.

  6. Sweetest in the Gale February 8th, 2010 7:41 am

    The visual I got from your words was wonderful. Lovely!

  7. Write Girl February 8th, 2010 8:20 pm

    Your haiku leaves a trail of vivid images. Your words are breathtaking.

  8. SandyCarlson February 8th, 2010 8:31 pm

    Like an echo. Beautiful.

  9. Tumblewords February 9th, 2010 6:28 pm

    Each time I read this, I enjoy it in a different way. Lovely.

  10. Sandy February 10th, 2010 5:47 am

    Beautiful. The photo is a poem in itself.

  11. Lisa at Greenbow February 12th, 2010 8:17 am

    Wonderful combination of prompts. I love to hear those Aspens breathing.

  12. Leo February 14th, 2010 10:11 am

    very beautiful haiku this.. thanks! :)

  13. Meri February 14th, 2010 5:58 pm

    This is a delight to the senses, as perfect haiku is.

  14. mia February 17th, 2010 10:08 am

    omg…this haiku is soooo gorgeous
    as if divine intervention held you pen.

  15. Gemma March 8th, 2010 12:19 am

    There is a sense of silent music lingering in this beautiful haiku!

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